An improvement over this mess, but still crap to me for the look was trying to go for...

Learned that certain ways things are colored on the PC/digitally you cant really replicate or it just doesn't work well on traditional paper and colored pencils. This was first thing I did using the new 72 color prismacolor pencil set I own vs what was left in my ancient 48 pencil set from 15 years ago.

This pic here is what I was trying to replicate. it looked good/cool to me in the image that was done digitally, but cant seem to have it not look retarded when drawing on paper with colored pencils.

Oh well. Practice, right? Hopefully more experience retained under my small artistic belt.