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Can't Argue With That. Part 1 by SiriusDF (critique requested)

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Can't Argue With That. Part 1 (critique requested)

SiriusDF

Introductory tale of Mr. Grubert enduring an unwanted exciting day in the world of industrial espionage aboard an Orbital Habitat.

Part 2 continues at: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/639850/can-t-argue-with-that-part-2

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    donqui

    I quite liked this! Your style is engaging and fluid, and I can see you planned the setting with some care (what with cylindrical stations for artificial gravity, the proceedings inside the re-entry spacecraft, etc...). I'm looking forward to the next chapters!