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SUMMERTIME by Shinrokurou (critique requested)

SUMMERTIME (critique requested)

Shinrokurou

  • «Dovevamo davvero passare in mezzo a tutti questi campi?»
    «Era la via più veloce. Dai, la mia vecchia casa è sopra quella collina»

  • "Did we really have to go across all these fields?"
    "It was the shortest way. Come on, my old house is over that hill"

Submission Information

Views:
466
Comments:
3
Favorites:
3
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

Comments

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    What cute characters! I really like this clean, yet textured look to your work! That said, I think the white dog's pose in the small panel is a bit too stiff. The poses in the larger panel are much more believable, and I'd love to have seen a bit more of that expression in the detailed-smaller panel. Still, I think you've got a very beautiful and clean landscape here. Great job! :)

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      Thank you, I really appreciate your opinion :) At first I hadn't planned to make that small panel, but then I decided to put it because I'm not very good at drawing figures and I needed some practice. Plus, I wanted to make this look like a comic page or something like that to make it a little more interesting and not just like a plain landscape scene.

      And also thanks for the fave ^_^

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        That's fine~ It was only my 2 cents. :) And you're welcome!