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Twinkletoes by Serran (critique requested)

Twinkletoes (critique requested)

Serran

One of my pony OCs. This little foal is called Twinkletoes (the tips of her hooves are a light periwinkle), and she currently doesn't have a cutiemark.

She a huge airhead and likes to think that the whole world is her friend.

This piece was also an excuse for me to practice on painting backgrounds which (as you can see) is what I'm most horrible at. Tips and crits are most wanted.

NCS means NCSerran, which is another alias I go by.

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    The background is really great! I like how you made the grass actually look like grass and the sky is nice to, just a little too much stars for my taste.
    The pony's position is nice, also the shading and high-lights. The mane could appreciate a little more practise, it looks too stiff. I sugest that you should do a few loose hair strings here and there and it would look more "alive". c:

    hope my critique was good and understandable ^.^

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      Thank you very much for the pointers~ They're plenty helpful uwu