Weasyl doesn't seem like the best community for writers, but I thought I might as well try again. If the submission doesn't show up, or looks odd, please let me know. I'm not so savvy with uploading things here on Weasyl.

Thank you for every comment and critique, as they are all helpful. I tend to be too self-critical, so it's nice to hear other's .

You can also email me comments, if you'd so choose, at sebastian_fox[at]ymail.com