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I only wanted to have fun
Learning to fly, learning to run
I let my heart decide the way
When I was young.
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My apologies for the late reply. ;~;
That said, I wanted to thank you for your feedback! I can totally see how the lips and (especially) the hand look rather rough in comparison to the rest of the features. I originally left the hand as such because I wanted the focus to be on just the face, but... in retrospect, it's probably just as important if it was pointed out. :3c I don't know if I'll have the time to go back and add some more details to this particular piece, but I'll keep that in mind for future compositions!
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I was trying to think of how I could critique this instead of rushing to say how awesome it is but honestly, I'm having a really hard time thinking of what is wrong with this. I think the only thing I could say is that the hand and lips look a bit more roughly done compared to the rest of the face, not sure if that was intentional. My favourite part about this drawing is the nose and eyes; how his right eye looks softer than the nose and other eye I think is very nice touch to give a sense of focus and depth. The shading is excellent as well.