Valentine's Day Commission by ScribbleKitty (critique requested)

Valentine's Day Commission (critique requested)

ScribbleKitty

27 February 2013 at 09:58:07 MST

This was a commission i did for Valentine's Day for FiyahLigerRawr on FA,

of him and his mate :3

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    Cute. :)

    As far as critique goes, they don't have shadows and there is no floor, and that bothers me when they're kneeling.. I think just one or the other would do.

    And, I like your shading style, but there's not much depth to it. It's like everything is a midtone. Which means very little contrast. As far as this piece, that's okay because you still have enough contrast in hue. But there's not enough contrast in shade.

    Hope I helped. :>

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      Thank yoou ^ ^

      That does help some. I'll try to choose a darker shade for future pieces.