Grimlet don't know what that is. by Sapphire Crook (critique requested)

Grimlet don't know what that is. (critique requested)

Sapphire Crook

21 July 2015 at 04:42:58 MDT

Honestly, this guy doesn't get enough love for someone that should be right up a Voraphile's alley.
Also, because of his diet of bears and birds, he's invincible (even to the Star-Man) because Rare's too shy to admit he ain't got no h'combs to dish out... bro.
http://banjokazooie.wikia.com/wiki/Grimlet

Anyway, I draw!? I guess all that work made me GUH, a perfect mood to get a tablet and work it.
And look, a background and fancy shading. Aren't I just a daring do?

Fixer-Points:

  • Smudges look good, for a start.
  • The left and right eye are eerily assymetrical.
  • The handle on the boat looks... snowy!
  • Should've gone hexagonical, since that's what the original looks like (even if those were due to technical limitations)
  • Bland background. Workable, but open to improvements, like more faded reds to indicate shading from ambient and directional lighting (especially under the handlebar on top)

Good points:

  • Good shadows.
  • Eerie mouth with spooky teeth
  • Honey comb doesn't look terrible.
  • Overall, the lines are getting better.
  • There's a (but not great) sense of what things are.

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