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Grimlet don't know what that is. by Sapphire Crook (critique requested)

Grimlet don't know what that is. (critique requested)

Sapphire Crook

Honestly, this guy doesn't get enough love for someone that should be right up a Voraphile's alley.
Also, because of his diet of bears and birds, he's invincible (even to the Star-Man) because Rare's too shy to admit he ain't got no h'combs to dish out... bro.
http://banjokazooie.wikia.com/wiki/Grimlet

Anyway, I draw!? I guess all that work made me GUH, a perfect mood to get a tablet and work it.
And look, a background and fancy shading. Aren't I just a daring do?

Fixer-Points:

  • Smudges look good, for a start.
  • The left and right eye are eerily assymetrical.
  • The handle on the boat looks... snowy!
  • Should've gone hexagonical, since that's what the original looks like (even if those were due to technical limitations)
  • Bland background. Workable, but open to improvements, like more faded reds to indicate shading from ambient and directional lighting (especially under the handlebar on top)

Good points:

  • Good shadows.
  • Eerie mouth with spooky teeth
  • Honey comb doesn't look terrible.
  • Overall, the lines are getting better.
  • There's a (but not great) sense of what things are.

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