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The Breegull Boat Part 3: Not familiar, is it? by Sapphire Crook (critique requested)

The Breegull Boat Part 3: Not familiar, is it? (critique requested)

Sapphire Crook

All things considered, I imagine they don't take night-time patrols all that serious anyway. It's a junky boat that's hard to see at night, so they're more likely to see the potential threat than the other way around.
And remember kids, always give your characters critical flaws you can poke at or use for an interesting event or character growth!

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