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Yuki by sadielizyy (critique requested)

Yuki

Yuki

“Aryanna” the boy mumbled, a slight blush spreading across his pale skin. His ice blue eyes gazed into the blue-grey ones staring back. The girl whose hand he held had short, slightly spiky red hair and also pale skin covered in an array of light freckles. A smile touched his face.

“I love you” the whisper was hardly audible, however her small mouth making the shapes to form the sounds was enough to tell.

I love you.

He loved her too, for so long now, watching her, admiring her through his hiding. When he finally came out of hiding to speak to the beautiful girl she knew who he was, she always knew.

“I love you Jack Frost.” She grinned and wrapped her arms around the silver haired boy. He smiled to. Finally, was all he could think.

Yuki (critique requested)

sadielizyy

basically just a fanfic shipping my girlfriend (AlchemicKami on DeviantART) with Jack Frost XD I did it because she said she hated him =p

cast:

AlchemicKami: http://lovely-light-tachi.wikia.com/wiki/AlchemicKami

Jack Frost: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack\_Frost

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