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Silence by Rusco Istar (critique requested)

The day's roar.

Comes the dark nighttime

Then? Silence...

Silence (critique requested)

Rusco Istar

This is my first very rough attempt to write a Haiku. Don't be so harsh >_<

Haiku is a kind of Japanese classical poetry. It's made with only a structure of three lines of 5-7-5 or 3-5-3 syllables, no stanza required.

I couldn't made the English one with a 5-7-5 that could say the same things as the Spanish one >>; No wonder... I made that one first and I was a rookie at English back then, circa 2007 ;P

I got Inspired when I woke up and heard the noise outside. I thinked about how noisy is the day in comparison to the night.

Versión en español disponible aquí.

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