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Commission for cougr.
lennud’s Leona preforming a violent search for her dimensional counterpart Lennud so she can be rid of him and get all the attention.
Leona: lennud
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- Category:
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What would they be?
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Well, I was looking at the smoke and I thought it might benefit if it had a clearer shape or form. It's very soft here and I think it could stand out more.
The other was the light direction in the right side building at the front. Generally all the light seems to be coming from the left side, but this one building feels a bit off.
Final niggle is the PNG format.. At this resolution you're not going to notice any drop in image quality if you used JPG, but it downloads so much faster.
Nitpicking, essentially. I like the piece and you did a good job with it.-
Yeah If anything the shadow on the one building could be reduced a little I think that will fix on off feeling. The smoke I could've played with more as I've never attempted this before. It didn't occur to me that at this size .jpg would still be an okay option I'll have to remember that for the future. Thanks for the feedback I'll try and fix a few things when I get some time.
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Made the changes the smoke looks better imo now.
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ducky
I like this. The face looks nice, and dem hips. Proper property damage is a pretty rare sight too.
There are a few small things that caught my attention, but I'm not sure if you want to hear those.