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Fawnlight by robin--eggs (critique requested)

Fawnlight (critique requested)

robin--eggs

this is a contest entry for a deviantart contest!! this is my warriors oc fawnlight, originally used in a tumblr warriors rp group that im no longer a part of, but, i love her a lot.


you are not permitted to use or repost! oc and art both belong to me!


commissions open!

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    Cute! I love the soft colors of the cat, along side the sharper stripes. Plus the fish eyes lens used is really interesting, like it was a photograph taken of a feral cat. The line art is crisp and clean, and the contrast is pretty balanced.

    Hmmm, for things that you could possibly improve, one thing I would suggest is to smooth the jagged edges of the circle. I'm not certain how you got that effect, but if you'd prefer a smoother circle edge you can either try: use a large round brush (not a binary brush if on SAI) and just do one huge dot. You can then just use a clipping mask. Or, if using Photoshop, use the shape making tool, right click on it, rasterize it, and there ya go! You can then use the clipping mask.

    Nice artwork C:

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      thank you so so much!! i appreciate this more than you know, and i'll definitely use that advice if i end up doing more like this !

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        Np, I really hope it helps! keep making good work <3