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A cheetah's Long Journey by reedman (critique requested)

A cheetah's Long Journey (critique requested)

reedman

A commission from the amazing Nitrade about a cheetah that gets to know a bull more than he wants to.

Characters belong to Nitrade

Critiques and comments are always appreciated.

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825
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Rating:
General
Category:
Literary / Story

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    poor Eddy- Not only will he have to explain himself to Alex after this, but he may also find that 'accidental' shrinking is more prone to happen once the bull knows he can safely give people the 'full tour' >:)

    thank you for the story!

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      no problem. I wish the best for poor Eddy