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Dragon Rage: The First War (picknick10's giftstory 6) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (picknick10's giftstory 6) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Oct 9, 2019

We were so close to getting a to see picknick10's other character and no I don't mean Ember or Amius. He has a fourth OC, but we won't see him until Eveeoni's seventh giftstory.

Also here's a blooper that Nick and Eveeoni/Sai put on their RP posts:
Nick reaches over the table and begins to eat Akuma's food. When that runs out, he grabs the poor hybrid boy and eats him, too.
Akuma: cries in corner
Akuma tosses dart and nails stand owner

Facts that may not be mentioned later:

  • Just as Akuma lays on the couch, he wonders if Strider and Axle are alright. They seem strong enough. So if Marc is as nutty as he sounded, they would be ok, right?
  • Akuma is good at winning games like the pillow throws because of his agility. He sacrificed strength growing up to work on reflexes and speed. Perhaps this trait is more befitting to a lightning-type dragon.
  • Akuma had heard something about stereotypical human girls playing pillow fights in their, but he found that to be ridiculous.
  • Just before Nick goes into the kitchen, Akuma mulls over Nick's words silently about being a decent human being. Albel would have called it weakness as he thinks that mercy is a waste. That people should face a full punishment to remember the lesson well. Albel had at least made Akuma certain that Nick was very much a bleeding heart. He was sure he could make an attempt on the mage's life and he wouldn't bat an eye. Akuma is also worried that Albel may have rubbed off on him.
  • Akuma does not know what a clown is, but he has heard of dragons being enslaved in circuses before, where they along with the animals are beaten into performing tricks.
  • Akuma never owned anything and he is used to traveling light.
  • Akuma does not know what a horse is.

Nick (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art
Atlas (c) me
Akuma and Kai (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art
Axle, Strider, Spinx and Marc (c) lorddraco8967 from

You can see the RP at this following link: )

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -

Table of Giftstories -