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Dragon Rage: The First War (shibathedragon's giftstory 4) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (shibathedragon's giftstory 4) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Oct 18, 2017

UPDATE: This part has been removed from the story because I misunderstood what generosity is at the time of first making this.

Kakoli spoke with incredulity, "That wasn't even generous." Generous is when you give something for free or give more than a fair trade.

Regardless of the man's deal or what her friend thought of it, Shiba accepted, "Yes."

Darn it, I wanted to put in the part where Shiba and Kakoli get to the literacy class in chapter 46, but I ran out of space. Oh well, at least there's next time whenever. And yes, I know Minerva encountered a male receptionist in chapter 45. But I'd like to think that the community center has two or more receptionists, who work on certain days.

Shiba and Kakoli (c) shibathedragon (this is her profile: )
Snively, Mentha and Gabriel (c) me
Torque (c) Symaro from Deviant Art

You can see the RP at this following link: )

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -

Table of Giftstories -