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Dragon Rage: The First War (Zeditha's giftstory 3) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (Zeditha's giftstory 3) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

19 November 2021 at 12:40:00 MST

Originally uploaded on Apr 14, 2017

While looking through the RP posts when working on a third gift for Zeditha, I noticed that the second half of the Petey scene from her second giftstory had been already mentioned in UberCatSR's 2nd giftstory. Oops, I made a mistake there. Oh well, since the scene's too long for me to remove and replace, plus being there for over 4 years, I'm just going to leave it there. Anyway Zeditha gave up the RP after she couldn't decide on her main character's actual backstory. Well Zeditha, if you're still looking for one, I got it right here on this giftstory.

Facts that might not be mentioned later:

  • Zeditha can probably carry two rabbits in her mouth, one on her back as long as she doesn't have to fly, and three with her tail curled around them in a bunch. Quite a lot of rabbits, but she prefers to eat her catch fresh in general. (fun fact)
  • Baltia likes biting dragons and humans, especially dragons. She won't admit it unless she's caught red-handed. (fun fact)
  • All of Baltia's skills are learned. She can fly impressively, hide very well, look adorable when she needs to, and she can hit almost anything with a small stone.

Differences from the RP:

  • In the RP during Zeditha's breakfast conversation, she says that she has been born after the Spell. But that would have contradicted Zeditha's backstory of trying to use magic for years.
  • Zeditha's story ends with Chi being surprised at Zeditha growing up fast.

Zeditha, Baltia and Mia (c) Zeditha (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209782 )
Atlas, Aeolus, Bam, Hewey, Kekul, Cirrus, Tavurth, Enamora, Volkin and Eatorn (c) me
Axle, Juna and Mekarth (c) lorddraco8967 from Fanfiction.net
Ember (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art
Akuma, Albel, Fayt and Chi (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art
Yopple (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Salvo (c) Sparksfly (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=213338 )
Petey (c) Psyduck (this is his profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209695 )

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231