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Dragon Rage: The First War (SparksflY's giftstory 2) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (SparksflY's giftstory 2) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

Originally uploaded on Jul 20, 2016

Sorry if the last section was rushed. I had forgotten to work on some of it this morning, then I had to go to work, and then I came back home and eat dinner.

Facts that may not be mentioned later

  • Yopple wanted to keep on beating Eatorn, but decides not to.
  • Yopple thinks that if he could beat Eatorn, he could beat anything. His ego has risen to a megalomania level, think he's powerful and good enough to get a high spot in the Vulture Horde. He is surethat he is feared by the horde now.

Sparks, Jupiter, Seliss, Pyro and Salvo (c) SparksflY (this is her profile: )
Aeolus, Kekul, Enamora, Cirrus, Hewey, Eatorn, Volkin and Emerald (c) me
Juna (c) lorddraco8967 from
Akuma (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art
Yopple (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Jericho (c) Forsaken Rider of Dreams (this is his profile: )
Baltia (c) Zeditha (this is her profile: )
Sargoth (c) Cenor (this is her profile: )

You can see the RP at this following link: )

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue -
Chapter 1 -
Chapter 26 -
Chapter 51 -

Table of Giftstories -