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Dragon Rage: The First War (SparksflY's giftstory 2) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (SparksflY's giftstory 2) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

12 November 2021 at 19:40:23 MST

Originally uploaded on Jul 20, 2016

Sorry if the last section was rushed. I had forgotten to work on some of it this morning, then I had to go to work, and then I came back home and eat dinner.

Facts that may not be mentioned later

  • Yopple wanted to keep on beating Eatorn, but decides not to.
  • Yopple thinks that if he could beat Eatorn, he could beat anything. His ego has risen to a megalomania level, think he's powerful and good enough to get a high spot in the Vulture Horde. He is surethat he is feared by the horde now.

Sparks, Jupiter, Seliss, Pyro and Salvo (c) SparksflY (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=213338 )
Aeolus, Kekul, Enamora, Cirrus, Hewey, Eatorn, Volkin and Emerald (c) me
Juna (c) lorddraco8967 from Fanfiction.net
Akuma (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art
Yopple (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Jericho (c) Forsaken Rider of Dreams (this is his profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=50939 )
Baltia (c) Zeditha (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=209782 )
Sargoth (c) Cenor (this is her profile: https://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showuser=213868 )

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0 )

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231