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Dragon Rage: The First War (DJVoxel's giftstory 1) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (DJVoxel's giftstory 1) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

6 November 2021 at 21:25:59 MDT

Originally uploaded on Feb 15, 2016

Facts that might not be mentioned again in the future:

  • Ohimia didn't get any training because she's tried before and failed.
  • She may have a phobia of blades due to Albel attacking her with his katana and is working to overcome that.
  • Ohimia has had experience with rough dragons before and backs away from Garin's push to avoid making him snap.
  • Ohimia and Yopple's deceased master, Esko, once told them that they were safe with him, but apparently his words may not be true.

Garin (c) DJVoxel from Deviant Art
Atlas and Aeolus (c) me
Axle, Mekarth, Juna and Violet (c) lorddraco8967 from Fanfiction.net
Yopple and Ohimia (c) Randomness-Central from Deviant Art
Albel (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231