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Dragon Rage: The First War (UberCatSR's giftstory 1) by Red Dragonette (critique requested)

Dragon Rage: The First War (UberCatSR's giftstory 1) (critique requested)

Red Dragonette

15 October 2021 at 14:55:05 MDT

Originally uploaded on Oct 5, 2014

About the Rubik's cube thing in the story; "Rina can't solve Rubik's cube" is a running gag in Rina's story back in Spyro Realms RP, so UberCatSR thought to put it there in the RP. And as for why I replaced Rina's flying from one place to another with using a teleport stone for travelling, I should remind everyone that Valencia is a planet that's bigger than Earth. I imagine that flight from one continent to another would take like many weeks, months, or maybe a few years. I figured a teleport stone would be a lot faster since Rina got to Rudvich in only one day.

Rina, El-Naise, and Geron (c) UberCatSR from Deviant Art
Atlas, Aeolus, Danielle, and Kylie (c) me
Akuma, Fayt, Albel, and Rika (c) Eveeoni from Deviant Art
Nick (c) picknick10 from Deviant Art

You can see the RP at this following link: http://forums.dragcave.net/index.php?showtopic=152686&st=0

Great War: Dragons vs Humans (c) picknick10
Story written by me
Dragon Cave (c) TJ09 (a.k.a. T.J. Lipscomb)

List of chapters
Prologue - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059799/dragon-rage-the-first-war-prologue
Chapter 1 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2059807/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-1
Chapter 26 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2066204/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-26
Chapter 51 - https://www.weasyl.com/~reddragonette/submissions/2075140/dragon-rage-the-first-war-chp-51

Table of Giftstories - https://www.weasyl.com/submissions?userid=195211&folderid=114231