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Short-terms side effects - P6 by RealDealMeal

Short-terms side effects - P6

RealDealMeal

its finally morning and we can wrap the experiment up as a TOTAL FAILURE, what will happen to the poor professor next? We'll see (one day)
i really hope the comic was of your liking , as always comments are super appreciated , let me know your opinion and don't feel afraid to give me feedback !!
thank you for reading <3

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    Ayy, great work on the comic, my dude!! I really enjoyed reading through it.
    The art was really solid -- the shading and expressions especially so! Not to mention, a goat character is always a treat to see. :3

    I do have some minor nitpicks, though: That hand in the first panel seems awful disproportionate. The amount of space between fingers, especially so. Oh, and I personally thought the weight gain felt a little rushed, but that might just be me.

    Other than that, like I said, shit was brilliant. Keep up the good work!

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      ehi , thank you so much for your feedback !! I'm really happy tou sticked around till the end ! <3

      regarding your feedback: i think you're 100% right about the pacig, i could've strecthed out a bit the WG to make it more engaging , i'll work on this on my next project !!
      for hand though i need a clarification , WHICH hand are you reffering to ? XD the one in front , near the antidote ore the one behind pushing moobs ?

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        The one in the front. The fingers look disproportionately long, yet thin, compared to the size of the palm.

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          mmmh , i think im starting to see it now .. XD
          i admit that these 3 fingered hands has been pretty challenging for me

          big thanks for the notes, i'll keep practicing till i get the ""hand"" of it ;)