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Please let me know if the wording needs to be changed and if the card isn't balanced.
Art by Eldrige of DA and FA
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Thanks for the suggestions. Please look at my other ones and let me know if there are fixes for those.
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Updated. How's that?
Also do you know a quote that would work for the card?
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Looks better!
And all that text is too much for flavor text. Flavor text is only on cards with short enough rules text to fit it.
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Sleet the Fox
"Equipped creature gets +1/+2 and has hexproof.
At the beginning of your upkeep, you may sacrifice a Spirit. If you do, put a +0/+1 counter on equipped creature.
Whenever Armor of Souls becomes unattached to a permanent, remove all +0/+1 counters from that permanent."
Equip: Sacrifice a Spirit"
Some suggestions: +0/+1 counters don't exist anymore. I'd do +1/+1 counters. Also, perhaps instead of +1/+1 counters, do "put a charge counter on Armor of Souls" instead and "Equipped creature gets +0/+1 for each charge counter on Armor of Souls." I also think it would be more elegant if it gives +0/+2 instead of +1/+2.
Just some suggestions. I randomly stumbled upon these and I've got enough experience with this stuff I thought I'd help!