5 March 2017 at 14:12:14 MST
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A commission for Ozawk. I forgot how much of a challenge winged characters could be, especially when they have patterning like an osprey!
on 5 March 2017 at 23:37:06 MST
Looks great, but since you asked for critique, I'll give this one: the legs could use some more detailing, they look too simple I believe.
Still, great job!
on 7 March 2017 at 02:37:46 MST
Thanks for the compliment and critique! I'll keep that in mind for future paintings.
on 6 March 2017 at 12:29:27 MST
Ransom !!!!!!!! Wow !! This is really good. The tight detailing on the character's face and upper body are wonderful. I also love how you played with the light source in that area, as well. It looks nice and bright there. :D The eye detail is also super excellent here. I can't stop starting at his eye~As far as critique is concerned, I would suggest pushing a similar level of detail on the lower body as well, starting right below the chest. The brush strokes look a bit too rough there (esp on both thighs) I also recommend smoothing out the clouds in the background. The rough edges there distract the eye away from the character.
I also agree that the legs themselves could use a bit more scale detailing. And the character's head could stand to be sized down just a touch - It looks just a little too big for the body.Last (but not least), I think some improvement would be had with one more light source that would cast a soft glow onto the very dark area of his character's wing/their back in general. That would give the character more of a three dimensional feel.
on 22 March 2017 at 18:34:31 MDT
Thank you for the thorough critique, Song! I appreciate the compliments and criticism together. You're really sweet.
on 23 March 2017 at 13:58:43 MDT
You've always given me the best and most useful critique ever, as well as been very uplifting and inspiring. I'm usually not good with critique, so I'm super happy I was able to put together a more useful one for ya >w< <3