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The last one you'll see on internet. For the others, buy the book ♥
► http://aisling-fanzine.blogspot.fr/p/contact.html (this book is only in french)
© Rakjah / Thess / Camille DEWILDE || 2013
© Braises T.1
Don't steal my art. If you want to use it in any ways, ask me before, please.
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Thank you very much for your comment x)
In fact, this is the final piece. I chose to work with only black and white. No greyscales nor colors. That's a choice. Maybe a bad one, but people like it in general ^^
For the background, I don't really draw them (I prefer drawing characters .). One day, I will like to draw them I hope >.<
Yes, the exterior is not really good. I draw it a year ago while the final pages have six months old. (there are 24 pages for this chapter). That was my first personnal comic, so I'm trying lot of things in parallel with my school lessons. That's really not perfect, but I'm proud of it nevertheless.I'll try to do better work for the next chapter ^^
Thank you again for your comment ! It will help me to draw better comic pages ^^
(sorry for my english ^^")
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You have strong, heavy blacks. I'm assuming that this is the line work only of your comic. I like the fact that you can express wrinkles, movement, and light effectively. I'm assuming this only gets better with whatever greyscale/color you've chosen for the finished piece.
I think your weakest aspect would be the drawn exterior of the house on the second page. I think it looks a little too boxy. The perspective isn't that interesting, like in the other panels. On a whole, the illusion of space is correct, but it feels very flat. I'd be curious to see what it looked like as a finished panel.
Regardless, I think you have a knack for texture, line, and light. It's really good! I'd love to see more comics in future. :3