Appetite (Part 7) by RaddaRaem

Appetite (Part 7)


13 September 2018 at 18:24:40 MDT

SolAxe draws absolutely amazing pictures. And I just keep on commissioning him and writing words with for them. So, after some back and forth with him, decided to splurge and get a whole series arted up starring a hunky squirrel guy that myself and WatchOutForDragons dreamed up! Then of course can't forget Max the husky who belongs to Sol!

Hope you enjoy!


A dismissive grunt, imperceptible even to civilzation ending colossi such as Max and Walter, echoed across the cosmos. Lips locked together, neither the squirrel nor husky paid the cosmic disturbance any heed. Their country devouring, and smothering, forms bumped happily against one another.

"Subjects' appetites appear to have tapered off, as expected, following" an unknown entity mused aloud. Its spoken word, more violent vibrations that coursed through the air than perceptible speech, threatened to send the planets sailing through the solar system off their axes. The existence, unknowable in size and scale, blotted out the blackness of space with its grey furred presence. Its nostrils flared as it observed the bloated squirrel and husky passionately embrace one another.

"Interesting. When subjects are afflicted in sync their stoked appetites encourage them to cooperate, if not copulate, with one another. Whereas in prior experiments, when the afflictions were staggered out, competition between the subjects proved intense."


An earth shaking belch, audible even to the unknown entity, radiated out from Max's lips in between kisses.

"Hmm." The entity pulled its lips flat as it watched expectantly.


Walter returned the gesture soon enough. His red furred stomach heaved and sloshed... only to settle as he and the husky started swapping saliva once more.

It sighed in disappointment. "The subjects' rate of growth has also tapered off exactly in line with the calculations. A shame," it added with a slurp of its tongue. The memories, gustatory and otherwise, of having to put a halt to experiments that threatened to expand exponentially lingered fondly at the forefront of its thoughts.

The mass of grey that had come to overwhelm existence slowly came into focus as it retreated. Even as it retreated to the edges of the solar system only a fraction of its form became perceptible to mortal eyes. A thick and meaty neck, attached to a broad and hulking pair of shoulders, went unnoticed by Walter and Max. As did the white furred muzzle and the soft and solar system smothering set of lips upon it.

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