(Sorry for the spam-uploads of revamped pages, it bugs me when the pages on dA don't make complete sense because of how I'm rewriting it, so I wanted to update the old pg.30 quickly because it no longer aligned with the current pg.29 X'D)
Long page is looooooong. I had to zoom in to read it. XD
Also, I know Raichu is desperate here, but did it not occur to her to go to Team Enterprise's base first for this? I mean he's well known already for "Liam Neeson"ing situations like this. XD
I mean, keep in mind that Team Enterprise wasn't even a thing in my original plot outline at this time, and also Team Inffidarious are the main characters, so ofc they gotta get Dumb Plot Shit thrown at them XDD
But Team Enterprise ARE canon now, so there needs to at least be a reason why Raichu didn't go to them first. Maybe Bilo asks why she didn't go to them first, she explains she did but they were already out on another mission, etc. That'll set up Ace and a few others making their "Coolaid Man" entrance in the midst of "Team Infidarious vs Ghostly Gang Round 2."
Eh, unfortunately the pages have already been written out well in advance (I'm at around pg.50 in terms of dialogue/layout/basic lineart) and adding that in wouldn't really fit with the flow of how the next pages are going, nor do I find it overly necessary since people fly into a panic during stressful situations sometimes -shrug-
Like, it coulda been used as a teaser-for-the-future moment, yeah, but it's not super duper needed XD (Plus I'm almost done the next page and don't wanna try and fit it in with an awkward-feeling or rushed transition lol)
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Can't they give the mother a reviver seed?