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Paths that whisper a song by QuentixStarwing

Paths that whisper a song

A whisper
A dandelion
A daze
A Dance
A hint
A view
A Path

The place that comes to an enlightened mind
Never has there been such peace in the past
A focus and a fine printed road
There was never a view that was lasting
Something that was on the wind, a dandelion
A maximized hint about where to go lay on the trail
Dazed by the sweet aroma of mystery lit by the road
There that dirt, nature carved street paved with leaves
Ridden with mushrooms, roots, ferns, insects; Life!

Never has there been a finer whisper to enthrall me on a charming path, a dance

Paths that whisper a song.

Paths that whisper a song

QuentixStarwing

Trying to create your own poetry style is excellent, it really allows a new form to breathe new words. I actually have no name for this format yet. But I'm going to see how many poems down the road I can craft like this. Even if it only sticks for me, it'd be worth it!

Here we go! Enjoy!

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