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Adolf's Art Attack by QueenDanny (critique requested)

Adolf's Art Attack (critique requested)

QueenDanny

Adolf learns about stranger danger & going off with people he does not know.
when him & his art become victim by a duo of art thieves.

Cain & Chilla's oldest son Adolf is a child prodigy & a talented artists & hopes to get into the art academy a school for the most high quality artists. Adolf paints & draws pictures for his family ,Pyro & friends as home made gifts. desperate to get into the fine arts academy Adolf soon meets two crafty characters during a stroll in the park with Blondi looking for new inspirations for art.

An Italian Badger & a Jackal whom were also artists approach Adolf after realizing that his art work was perfecto. The badger & Jackal also painted pictures for sale but didn't make a dime as they were not very good artists. the duo introduced themselves as teachers from the fine arts academy tricking the kind & nice Adolf. Adolf looks up to the two as idols but falls for there devious trick & Him & Blondi following the two to an art studio 30 mins from Notre Dame.

The Badger tells Adolf that if he did art for them they would submit his work into the fine arts academy. & would make enough money to make it as an artists at the fine arts academy. Adolf agrees & draws & paints pictures for the two his pictures very detailed in quality & perfect critiques for the two failed artists.
the badger is impressed & tells Adolf to draw some more. Adolf is happy & feels accepted. he promises the two he would be back at there art studio the next day to draw some more for the art academy.

The two then sale Adolf's art claiming it as there own. the two make profit & lots of money from Adolf's art . keeping it all to themselves And keeping the money secret from Adolf. The two sale all the pictures Adolf had done for them that night before Adolf comes back the next evening. The badger continues to lie to Adolf keeping the Aryans hopes up about getting into the art academy.

But as days pass Pyro , Dexter & Bijou question Adolf where he was going every day & Adolf questions the two about the art academy.The two continue to push Adolf as he eventually becomes worn down & tired from working more then his usual. But the two continue to push Adolf to create more art for them.

ADOLF: I am awful tired can I take the night off.

BADGER: NO! you want to be in the art academy don't ya?!

ADOLF: Why yes more then any thing in the world is to be in the academy with the best artists ever found.

BADGER: then you have to work. now get to painting.

ADOLF: But-

BADGER Listen kid the art academy expects art to be done at a certian time period. if you don't do art when your suppose to then you will never get in & you can kiss that dream good bye. Trust me kid I work at the academy.

ADOLF: Alright then I guess I can do atleast one more

BADGER: Good boy

ADOLF: What does the art academy say about my art when you take it to them every day this week. I bet every one in the school knows all about me now. they've gotta let me in now.

BADGER : Of course they do. with about 50 dollars to even 200 dollars a painting. my art career is saved.

ADOLF: our art career right!? You are crediting me aren't ya!

BADGER Oh yes lots of credit.

A Suspicious Blondi Growled At the two

ADOLF: I feel so accepted

That night Adolf ventures around the badgers art studio over hearing the badgers voice from another room Adolf peeks into the small open crack in the door Adolf over hears there plans of selling his art with no mention of credit for him & keeping the profit Adolf is shocked & angry aswell. feeling hurt & used Adolf walks back over to his canvas sitting down on his stool in disappointment.

The next morning the badger is outraged that Adolf had not finished his art last night & scolds him for it. an angry Adolf confronts the badger & Jackal telling them that they were stealing his art & keeping all of the money that should be his threatening the duo with his royal parents.

Adolf then starts for home but is grabbed by the nap of his neck & tossed into a wooden caged crate just big enough for him. the badger locked the cage looking down at a fear stricken Adolf.

BADGER This will be your home where I can find you always

ADOLF No... no...

BADGER: Yes..., yes , to me you belong.

ADOLF: Let me out , Now. you don't want any trouble with my dad.

BADGER You will make lots of money for us with your talented art work when we go back to Italy.

ADOLF: Italy.?

BADGER: Yes, we leave for Italy first thing in the morning

ADOLF: But I can't go to Italy I won't go

BADGER: Don't fret little boy I thought you wanted to be an artists. you change your mind.

ADOLF: No, Adolf cried I want to go home

BADGER: Don't be silly you are home with me. & you will like Italy & some of the best artists school in Europe.

Adolf Cried, Sobbing as he wiped his tears.

ADOLF: I want my mommy & Pyro

BADGER: you have me I'm better And All you need is a canvas & some paint brushes. you'll be happy again you'll love Italy I promise now no more tears I'll handle all your needs.

Adolf till sobbing wiped his eyes

ADOLF: Then I just won't draw for you any more what do you have to say about that Adolf told the two in a cocky tone.

BADGER: Pulls out pistol & aims the gun at Adolf Then you & I are going to have a problem.

ADOLF: Alright I'll draw for you I will. Adolf replied still crying

Adolf trembles in fear backing up to the back of his cage & sits there he begins to cry. A vicious Blondi hearing her masters cries ran out from another room Savagely barking & growling she leaped with open jaw at the badger biting his wrists & grabbing the gun from his hand a loud gun shot struck the floor missing Adolf.

The Badger screamed holding his hand ordering his friend to grabbed the German Shapard.

BADGER: Grab that Dog ,grab that dog it's got my gun.

ADOLF: Run Blondi Save yourself. Adolf screamed.

Blondi ran through the art studio with the pistol clinched in her jaws evading the Corrupt artists trying to grab her. running toward an open window Blondi jumped onto a stack of boxes & jumped out the window & took off on swift paws as fast as she could to find Pyro.

JACKAL: The Dog got away Boss, it jumped out the back window & ran off

BADGER: Don't worry about it we already have what we need.

BADGER: * Turns back to a crying Adolf in his cage* Now just stay here little one I will be back with some new paints & brushes for you.would you like that.

ADOLF : Sobbed

BADGER: Of course you would your an artists

Blondi runs back to the church & looks for Pyro barking frantically

GABRIEL: Isn't that Blondi

PYRO: Yeah but where's Adolf.?

BLONDI: Oh thank goodness I found you hurry you've gotta come Adolf's in trouble

PYRO: Adolf.?.

BLONDI: He's been kidnapped

Pyro follows Blondi on swift paws
.

Blondie navigates ally ways & stair cases leading Pyro to an art studio. Pyro opens the the door & walks in after Blondie the dog trots over to a area that was covered by a white blanket. she barks summoning pyro to her. Adolfs perks up his ears to the sound of Pyro's voice . wiping the tears from his eyes Adolf looks with a smile as Pyro un covers the cage.

PYRO: Adolf!

ADOLF: Pyro, you found me. I thought Id never see you again

PYRO: What happen to you.?

ADOLF: I was. um..Well I. I

PYRO: You can tell me later I'll get you out of here.

Pyro breaks the lock with her magic & frees Adolf. the two reunite with a grateful hug. & Adolf pets Blondie hugging his dog.

ADOLF: Leaped into Pyro's arms crying

ADOLF: Pyro I was so scared

PYRO: Your safe now it's gonna be alright

ADOLF: How did you know where to find me

PYRO: Thanks to Blondi she helped me find you

ADOLF: Thanks Blondi Adolf hugged his dog

PYRO: where are your crutches, Adolf

ADOLF: the badger & his friend took them.

PYRO: will get them back.

ADOLF; Go find my crutches Blondie, go on girl.

Blondie scopes the area finding the crutches in the badgers bedroom leaning up against the wall. Blondie retrieves the crutches carrying them back to Adolf in her mouth.

ADOLF: Thanks Blondi. Adolf pets his dog on the head.

PYRO: we've got to get out of here now Adolf.

The badger & his Jackal friend eventually catch up to Pyro & blondi. & trap them in the art studio with them turning on Pyro, Adolf & the German Sheppard.

BLONDIE: Growls

BADGER: Nice of you to join us Frenchy.

PYRO: Pounces on the two pressing his hands against there throats pinning them to the wall ?

BADGER: please don't kill us.

PYRO: SILENCE! * Pyro Yelled*

BADGER: We're gonna shut up right now

JACKAL: Hey were really sorry

PYRO: If you Italians ever come near my nephew again Pyro threatened in a demanding tone

BADGER: This is your brother

JACKAL: all yours

BADGER: I didn't know that did you.

JACKAL: No of Course not No

PYRO Roared a frightful tone scaring the two out of the art studio

ADOLF: You sure showed them Lets go Home

PYRO: Just a minuet I'm not finished with you Adolf Hitler Adi

ADOLF: * Ears lower* Uh oh Full name I'm in trouble arn't I

PYRO: Yes you are

ADOLF: I'm sorry I made a big mistake I shouldn't have gone off with some one I didn't know. I promise I won't do it again.

PYRO: I know you won't because I'm going to make sure you don't.

ADOLF: peers up at Pyro

PYRO: Your confined to the Church that means no cartoons , video games, Ice Cream or friends till further notice

ADOLF: So I can't go to school

PYRO: you have to go to School

ADOLF: Your mad at me.?

PYRO: Not Mad just dissapointed and scared

ADOLF: But your a vampire vampires don't get scared

PYRO: well I was today

ADOLF: You were.?

PYRO: Oui, I thought I might loose you. there are dangerous people out here Adolf if anyone took you away from me We'd never see each other again. you don't want that do you.?

ADOLF: No Pyro id be so scared & sad. & I really thought id never see you again

PYRO: I Thought so. Now lets go home

That Following Saturday

ADOLF: looks out the window at his friends Dexter & Bijou coming to play with him

ADOLF: I can't go play with you guys after all

DEXTER: Oh come on why not

ADOLF: I decided to stay inside the church help out with some chores & stuff

BIJOU: In other words your grounded

ADOLF: Oh you know I figured I violated Pyro's trust by going off with strangers I should probably think about what I did & stuff.

BIJOU: WOW, Adolf thats very adult of you

ADOLF: Sighs lovingly

the two Italian artists are summoned to live in the palace in Atlantis as the royal painters.
when Adolf grows up. Adolf teaches the two to be better artists as they become fast friends.

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