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Grentail Manor Ch8 by PsychicImmortality (critique requested)

Grentail Manor Ch8 (critique requested)

PsychicImmortality

20 January 2014 at 09:47:58 MST

Eighth Chapter.

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Literary / Story

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    Ok this is a great story so far. Liking the concept of using fat to fuel magic,assuming I read correctly, Deffinately cannot wait for the next chapter

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      Thanks for the feedback, it's greatly appreciated!

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        you're very welcome. Couldn't stop reading it even if my life depended on it :b Kinda happens when I find a story I like enough and I'm not a big reader