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GBA: Got Wrecked (Pages 1-5 redux) by Portmanpreau

GBA: Got Wrecked (Pages 1-5 redux)

Portmanpreau

GBA: Got Wrecked (Pages 1-5 redux)

Here are the definitive first five pages of Got Wrecked!

Okay, so...I try not to revisit the past, but the first 'pages' of Got Wrecked were really bothering me. The fact that it was done with analog art and colored digitally was an eyesore, the dialog was blank-slatey and stilted as it was my first go at writing the characters and hadn't found their voices yet, and I had apparently had issues with making the their' heads too small by comparison to their bodies. (Also, identifying a page as a single panel worked when I was a novice comicker, but it's an intolerable excuse now.) I looked at them and knew that I could do better given my current skills. It's a little cramped, but it works out a lot better than before.

(Honestly, the first two thirds of Got Wrecked looks like crap, but I can't make a special edition for the whole thing.)

I made a few changes here and there: some design quirks match the characters' current appearance as opposed to the ones they had during Got Wrecked (Nina's wings are smaller and their eyebrows are all more pronounced, for example), and I tweaked the roster of The Wreckers, which has been accounted for in later pages of the series. I also punched up the dialog and body language to better match the characters. I hope all of this has come across.

Please enjoy~

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