Kezhon: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/3cakybpwwgu40xl/AADyzJEhBpNzMAZCSEO0jWzRa?dl=0
O'neice: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/11qkqeyrqe2w946/AADc4msjf2LzajerY8mpXB2va?dl=0
More info: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/6563238/
This will be uploaded once a week on Sundays. More if progress speeds up
Basic Synopsis: A wing it styled adult comic where Kezhon enters into his heat, and is O'neice's first time dealing with it.
Puffing I got the idea from my friend's cat who we both like to tease. And every time she looks right at us and let's out this annoyed puff/huff kinda sound and it's hilarious XD (mainly cause we are jerks)
That, "rrrrrr" is him doing his purr. It's a rumbling kind of noise and isn't normally very vocal unless you are really really close to him. It can be a lot louder, but it's not very common and depends greatly on the circumstance. Best I can describe it, it's like a powerful vibration, kind of like when you put your hand on your cat while they are purring, again only stronger. It's incredibly soothing, if your hugging him while he's doing this, you'd end up passing out and never want to leave XD idea actually came from me snuggling my cat, I always have an easier time falling asleep when she snuggles with me purring
Personal note: I should add again, that when I use this style more in the future, I will NOT be hand writing everything! As I'm pretty aware that my handwriting is horrifying XD
This is a test comic for a new style I am thinking of trying for my big comic, I would greatly appreciate feedback! Text and bubbles will be done digitally
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Velantian
Not my normal genre, but the styling is very reminiscent of the '60's underground comics, Gilbert Sheldon of Zap or early Bill Griffith in the Screw years. Very recognizable and vibrant. I wouldn't worry about the rough lines you mentioned in page three, I personally prefer it. Let it evolve, be energenic and keep up the good work.