oPoison - Moonlit by PlayPossum (critique requested)

oPoison - Moonlit

oPoison - Moonlit (critique requested)

PlayPossum

11 February 2014 at 21:20:10 MST

oPoison:

"Man, that daelmacro guy has been releasing some pretty nice asian-themed songs. :O
Now I feel inspired. Damn! There it goes a nice night of sleep.
Now let's see here..."


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    Luan :(

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    I liked this song.

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      Really? Thank you! ^^

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    This actually pretty good ! Nice melodies kept me listening until the end.
    You could do more with the percussion though, and not necessarily more different sounds, but have some different patterns. Slight variations of existing ones do lot of good. There were some places where the "knock" went on really rapidly... perhaps remove couple of them in there... ? knock knock - knock knock knock - ... It keeps things interesting, as it breaks what you were expecting and insetad gives something new haha.
    But yes, this was a good listen :)

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      I've been reading some guides, but guess I played safe in this one with a single pattern. I'm slowly learning how to build rolls, making a 2 or 4 compasses long patterns (varying the first one) and whatnot, I promise I'll try to put that in my next piece! Thanks for the honest feedback, Tiido. ^^

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    Cool! :D

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      Glad you think sssso!