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Rasputitsa by PanzerschreckLeopard (critique requested)

Rasputitsa (critique requested)

PanzerschreckLeopard

Aka, "When the entire USSR becomes the world's biggest mud pit." Here we see Sasha, the IS-2, struggling not to sink, but it's a losing battle...

For http://livingmachineaddicts.deviantart.com/journal/Contest-with-prizes-374556258 , a contest for http://livingmachineaddicts.deviantart.com/

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General
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Visual / Digital

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  • Link

    Welp, ya asked for a critique. Don't shoot the messenger. So, the rifleman over in the mud looks horrifying. Eye is huge, eyebrow is a line, and the nose looks like a bit of a crowbar that's been chopped off and shoved into gray puddy. The mud is not textured at all, and is very poorly colored. The gun seems really jittery and poorly drawn. But outside of those critiques, the image is pretty decent. The tank in the distance is well drawn, the trees look good, the big tank looks pretty great, although the mud looks pretty piss poor again. Treds look neat. Only complaint with the big tank is the disturbingly realistic eye and face, which makes the tank look more alive than the character with the rifle.

    • Link

      Well I did focus more on the living tank than anything else. :P Thanks though, I'd never tried mud effects before though.

      • Link

        It helps to have some reference images up for what sort of texture to go fur with the mud. Making everything sorta hilly and just coloring the muddy parts in with brown is not a good way of doing it. That aside, if you wanted to keep a focus on the tank, the rifleman shouldn't be there. :/

        • Link

          I was just using him to fill empty space, and I thought it'd be good to show someone reacting to her getting stuck.

  • Link

    tank girl , mud , spinning, you sir , that's so brillant (^w^)