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xD Sorry it's so much at once! xDDD
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It is a bit XD I think some parts need slowing down or more detail filled in. I'm going to keep reading and hope everything becomes clear at some point :) Keep up the good work!
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Hehe, its understandable. I'm trying not to get too wrapped up in one area, but still show relationship stuff. It can be pretty tough! If there is something specific you're having trouble with though, I'll gladly try and help! :D
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I'm mostly finding the transition gaps a bit abrupt and confusing as you have one scene, and then obviously there's downtime/travel time that might be a little bit boring so you skip it to the next scene, but because there's not always lead-out and rarely lead-in to the next scene my brain takes a couple of seconds to work out what's going on XD
However if I take each scene as a standalone inside a story arc I find I can understand it better. So mindful of transitions if you want it to be one long coherent story, everything seems to be fine if you were going more for standalone episodes with a story arc :)
I totally get trying not to be too wrapped up in one area and still show developing relationships (though I usually have problems with trying not to be too subtle with a lot of relationship stuff XD), I think you're doing a pretty good job showing how the Pokemon and the trainer get on with each other as time goes by :)
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^^ <3333
I'm going to try and give a little bit of a catch up to help out. I think I have so many issues with the transitioning bit of things because I want to fit soooo much info and action into one chapter without being too crazy about one chapter in specifics. @____@; I do tend to have issues with biting off more than I can chew with certain things.-
I know that feeling (of biting off more than you can chew) XD
The forest scene thus far is well paced, it was everything before that I was struggling to make sense of :) Do you have a backlog of these things you can post as you go or do you just work really fast?
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I worked out a simpler style of art to work with and a process so that I can get this done at a faster pace and certain specific events that I would like to happen throughout the game that are my own "twists" I planned as markers before starting. @__@ I'd feel horrible if I took forever to post an update, and on top of that, I would probably not finish the comic! (It's also allowed me to add in characters that other people have requested, so I give them some attention while continuing to work. I'm too nice. xD)
Right now, I have juuuuussst passed Whitney in game. I haven't passed the comic toooo far ahead or I won't properly remember what's happened. xD This way, I don't have to write everything that happens down, I can keep working on page composition via light thumbnails, and I can still work on getting my storyline to be where I want.
Originally though, I wanted to post 5 pages at a time, but that's probably why things turned out super fast paced earlier on, because I was sooo eager to get pages online. Eventually, I just settled on updating one page at a time. xD
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I personally agree that it is going fast, but I enjoy a fast comic. Sometimes then they get too prolonged and I don't like having half of a comic all to romance like nothing is wrong, even though the games have so much to do. Though it is nice for me, I guess it isn't for other people and that's okay.
Now about this page, holy god. I just love it when you draw the noctowls, they're so like
MMMMMM
when you draw them.-
It is really difficult to show everything the game has to offer and still not be nicely paced. ^^; I try to keep some action going to keep everyone interested!
Haha, mmmmmmm? Are you planning on cookin one of em up?! XD
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Yeah, I understand that. Making a comic is hard, but you're doing it well.
mmmmm
like
mmm dat sexy birdmon booty
But yes, I shall eat one >:3-
xDDDD Ahahahaha. You sound like that could be a bit conflicting in some senses.
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Oh gosh
I just re-read what I wrote
wtf drugs was I on xD
I don't want to eat birdmon booty
nooooo thankyou
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I shot through this thing from the beginning because I like your style, but I have to admit that up until the last few pages where everyone gets lost in the woods and the amusing romance between the owl and rat is disrupted by the enamoured Oddish I have exactly no idea what's going on! :)