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Denali of the Wild by Pagerda (critique requested)

Denali of the Wild (critique requested)

Pagerda

Written mid 2013 (not quite revised yet).
Written work for one of my old classes. We had to include themes having to do with evolution or other things we'd discussed in the class before. I'd done a presentation on feral children because we read Tarzan, and because I didn't want to have to come up with a completely new idea (though I did have one, it would have taken too much time to develop it and whatnot), I used three of my already-existing characters and added a story to them.

I'm sure there are a nice heap of errors and things that could have been done better, but it wasn't a creative writing class, so I didn't really bother with making it excessively grand, especially since I didn't want to have to print out too many pages.

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