Gift for FayV by Ouiji (critique requested)

Gift for FayV (critique requested)

Ouiji

22 April 2015 at 19:45:01 MDT

Not a terribly creative title, but yeah. Been practicing lately and wanted to share ^_^
Character belongs to FayV

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    Looks like you're doing pretty well, and you maintained proportions for the most part. I would work on the general 'shapes' presented by the human figure. Particularly how the muscles curve. The biceps and calves could use more defining, as well as the joints in the knees and elbows! I would recommend practising your anatomy, but I really think that's all you need: practise. The more often you draw stuff like this, the more confident you'll become, and that'll help with how 'shaky' some of your line work looks.

    Good luck with practising artwork, and have fun ^w^