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Sarmanian, 4 Minutes after Impact by Nelan (critique requested)

Sarmanian, 4 Minutes after Impact (critique requested)

Nelan

The third and final part of the Sarmanian series. If you haven't read Part One, you can find it here: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/460717/23-miles-from-sarmanian-circa-198x

Like the rest of Sarmanian, it was written a few months ago, and I remember having a good bit of fun with it. However, it also never received much in the way of feedback, so if you're reading it, please leave a comment or two. I'd really appreciate hearing whether or not my Sarmanian experiment can be considered a success.

As always, thanks for reading!

Part One: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/460717/23-miles-from-sarmanian-circa-198x

Part Two: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/460745/sarmanian-13-42

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