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Lil Wolf - Broken Black by MrERyder (critique requested)

Claws of onyx pressing down
digging, clawing, scratching down.

Eyes of jade flicking 'round
glancing, staring, looking 'round.

Tail of charcoal tightly wound
twitching, wriggling, singly wound.

Fur of crimson dripping unbound
digging, clawing, bleeding unbound.

Lil wolf of gray, black and red
frantic, panicked, broken and red.

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Lil Wolf - Broken Black (critique requested)

MrERyder

Lil wolf poem #2

Written a few minutes ago after submitting #1.

Written by me.

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    Ampzero

    i love this o3o

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      MrERyder

      Thank you ^-^

      There's a poem that goes before this one too~