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It's okay thom by mongreldog

It's okay thom

mongreldog

not everybody makes it

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    I don't think he's going to find solace in that.

    There was an interesting picture (NSFW) I'd seen posted up on FA discussing how to plot out the events leading up to a bloody mess (which is what this looks like), in order to make a more effective scene.

    Some something like how Thom walked over to the wall, and how the blood/not-blood travelled with him and splashed over him during the preceding events could probably stand to be better portrayed. Otherwise it looks as if he's sort of just leaking from his right foot.

    Poor Thom.

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      Mm yeah that is very true. It wasn't tremendously planned in any sense really; it was a doodle i did in a depressed mood :I

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      lol i just realised i put "critique requested"; I didn't realise I'd done that! But thank you :3

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        Hahaha. No problem. <3 I wouldn't have been so verbose otherwise.

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    Getting a Dead Space vibe.

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      I've certainly played it :3

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        Seen Dead Space: Downfall? :0

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          i tried watching it but the animation was bad and also tbh i never really felt like Dead Space had a coherent enough story :\

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            it's mostly just gore porn anyway!

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    it says crit req'd but my first reaction to seeing this is 'wow ur getting better tho'. he's really well drawn here! solid

    i kind of had the same brief interpretation that thom himself was a goner, but your comment doesn't resolve that ambiguity so i wonder if it's deliberate. i like it, it's grim and unsettling. his facial expression reads appropriately for either interpretatiojn

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      Aw thank u man and yeah it meant to be ambiguous. I need to remove the critique requested thing actually because it really is a doodle that I just did as I went along (but thank you I do appreciate the critique stuff, im not being precious) :I it only got BLOODY right at the end and I'm not sure whether it was really necessary

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    I love the survival horror vibe.

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    Outstanding job man.

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    What horrors did he experience...?

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    I'd normally make some sort of "things best left unseen" crack (a funny one, I assure you), but Thom's eyes are a bit too effective for humor at the moment. Well done, although it looks like he's due for a few weeks with TherapyBot after this (the good one, not the one with the broken couch).

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    holy shit this is awesome

    at least he didnt get his socks dirty . .

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    It look like Thom mess up his kitchen with chocolate, but I know how you feel :') , you must need me to your Space ship!

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    This is just harrowing, poor Thom.