The first chapter of my novel, The Changing Angel.
I want to finish the story before I go back to tweak the first chapters (technology needs some upgrading and a few minor plot points to be updated). I do hope to have this published someday, so the final version will have some slight changes.
The more obvious non-humans will appear a bit later in the story.
Enjoy!
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Volt Siano
Ooooooh! Nice start!
Do I sense a bit of foreshadowing in her father's obsession?