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Carnival of Traitors - Prologue (part I) by MFarley (critique requested)

Carnival of Traitors - Prologue (part I) (critique requested)

MFarley

Hello, everyone!

It's my first submission here, on Weasyl. I hope this site will get more popular in the future, as I very much value the layout and thus decided to open an account and post my story here as well, as on SoFurry and Furaffinity. It's a bit different from the ones published there, as I didn't update them yet.

It was a lot of hard work, so go easy on me and keep in mind that this is not my first language. I hope you will enjoy it and I'll be very greatful if you point out where I've made mistakes, so I can work on my grasp of language.

It's important to say that I've received a great support on translating and correction from my fellow writer - sleths. I don't know if he is present on Weasyl, so I recommend you go to SoFurry and Furaffinity and find him, as he has some hot stories for you to enjoy.

Carnival of Traitors is my attempt at telling a story settled in the classic medieval/rennaissance setting, maybe with a little bit of magic. There will be knights, battles, conspiracy, violence and of course... sex ;] And equally important - in the middle of this - several protagonists representing different social classes and types of characters, whose fates and lives will inevitably cross and who knows what will happen? ;]

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