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College by metaniscient (critique requested)

College (critique requested)

metaniscient

Oooohhhh... gotta get pumped for that gen relativity final. Gotta make an a... probably not though.

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    That's been first semester of college for me in a bombshell.

    As for some quick critiques
    1) what happened to the coloring under your character's next between the first and third panel
    2) facial expression is solid and conveys the "oh fuck" nature of the transition to college
    3) The use of different backgrounds to dictate mood further adds to this effect.
    4) maybe raise your character in third panel so that his eyes match the rule of thirds

    Good job overall. Hope to see more work from you.

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      Damn, I forgot about the neck. Thanks for the advice.