And page 51!, mistakes commited by the characters all over the page, Charlie shouldn't be trying to listen like that, Jessi should have considered the possibility that whoever was right at the door was sticking their ear to it, and god dammit Christine, you're supposed to keep Charlie's identity as secret, at least for now.
That's one important detail, in a single day, two new girls found out about Charlie, but Jessi isn't that directly connected to her, how is she going to react? And more importantly, will they be able to keep things quiet? Two people in just a couple hours isn't a good sign if they're trying to stay under the radar.
Christine I always planned as kind of a motherly character, in behaviour I mean, Charlie's personality I think hasn't been quite shown yet, as the whole ordeal with her transformation is kind of overwhelming still, resulting in her just being worried and stressed since the comic started. Valentina is much more developed in that regard, her being noisy, immature and imposing, curses often and doesn't always know when to shut up.
Now comes Jessi, who in the only three pages where you've seen her she acts more mature, just someone focusing on their business, what's going to happen with her though? How is she going to react? Mmmm... >:3
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Cover Chapter 3 - https://www.weasyl.com/%7Ementalcrash/submissions/1627012/is-it-summer-yet-chapter-iii
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