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Besieged Ch.4 by Mecha-Mightyenador (critique requested)

Besieged Ch.4 (critique requested)

Mecha-Mightyenador

Chapter 4 up for reading pleasure. If you have any thoughts so far I'd love to hear them.

The group comes upon a large chasm that they have to cross to reach their intended destination. With a long fall on one side, a vertical cliff on the other, the group has to trek carefully across if they want to make it. And things only get worse when a storm comes roaring in.

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