Detachment - Chapter 1 by Matt (critique requested)

Detachment - Chapter 1 (critique requested)

Matt

11 September 2013 at 19:34:18 MDT

This was mostly meant as an introduction. I haven't written anything serious in years, and I wanted to get back into a writing rhythm as well as getting used to doing thing with characters that I'm not exactly comfortable with.

Any/every critique/comment is appreciated.

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    Love it, dude!