Ch 1: Taking Flight Again by lunaras13 (critique requested)

Ch 1: Taking Flight Again (critique requested)

lunaras13

14 May 2015 at 00:25:38 MDT

Chapter 1 for The Path Only a God May Walk a story I'm trying to write.

Slight introduction to the main character and the dungeons and dragons-esc world he lives in. His actual backstory will come later.

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