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[SHORT FILM] Lūdō by L James (critique requested)

[SHORT FILM] Lūdō (critique requested)

L James

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At long last, Lūdō's here!! My first real short film, made almost entirely with open source software. Please let me know what you think! I'm so excited to share this!

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    It's quite adorable and love the animation style aand the little story. I noticed two things though, the music doesn't seem to fit with visuals and repeats. Perhaps softer and if not a longer song then maybe a song that lends it self well to looping? All in all quite a good quality short film, the quality remind me of some of the really high quality French shorts I watch. So good job! Wonderful little film!

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      I noticed you did this on a Linux, that's impressive.

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        Nope, didn't use Linux! Thats the only thing that wasn't open source - I used Windows 10. I wanna use Linux at some point tho, I've heard Synfig Studio runs a little better on it anyway +v+ Thanks also for the great feedback! The music is actually a full two minutes, but I can see now that the spot where it goes quiet and starts up again (sounding a lot like the beginning) kind of sounds like the music just starting over. I'll keep that in mind in the future! Also yeah, the sound might not be the most fitting for the film's style and story. I'll watch out for that too! Thank you!