Dwarves and Potatoes by Lilli (critique requested)

Dwarves and Potatoes (critique requested)

Lilli

5 May 2018 at 02:34:21 MDT

An older one-shot... the character Tolthe ended up being poached and put into my sort-of-kind-of novel later on. Still a barkeep, still a pain in the ass.

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    I really love the dialogue in this piece! It feels natural