Jack's Tail: Rebirth into a Nightmare by Ligerstripe (critique requested)

Jack's Tail: Rebirth into a Nightmare (critique requested)

Ligerstripe

6 December 2015 at 18:06:57 MST

Here is chapter 2 of Jack's Tail. Here we get into the main meat of the story, Jack has wakes up to a new disturbing reality.
He then builds a wall of denial as he tries to survive his first day or so in his new life.
This chapter has some more 'adult' themes and is tagged as such but it shouldn't stray 'too' far and leave me with other options later without having to re-edit it.
I also expect this chapter to get more views until we get to the halfway point in the story simply from the tags. So if you are one of those people who stumble upon this chapter via a tag search please read chapter one first.

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