Jack's Tail - It is who you know by Ligerstripe (critique requested)

Jack's Tail - It is who you know (critique requested)

Ligerstripe

9 October 2015 at 12:57:14 MDT

This is it. The first chapter of my first 'serious' attempt at writing.
The story takes place in the Bio-Morph universe which was co-created with the help of https://www.furaffinity.net/user/seirei-puff But jack and all characters represented are my intelectual property. Unless otherwise noted of course.

We don't really get into the meat of the story in the first chapter, just a little overview of the universe from the main character's perspective. Some of his attitudes on Bio-Morphs.

I am by no means perfect in my editing skills so please feel free to point out missed errors.

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